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Free Sample: Paradise, Nevada

Hey everybody, Flobo here.

It’s time for another free sample posting. This is where I post something that has been published in one of my books absolutely free for your enjoyment. Today’s entry comes from my book, “By The Ounce And Other Tales” and it’s called “Paradise, Nevada.

As the title suggests, “Paradise, Nevada” is actually a ode to Las Vegas, in which the majority of the Las Vegas strip lies in the unincorporated town of Paradise. It’s an obscure fact, but a fact just the same. I had fun merging the expectations people have when coming to Las Vegas and the reality. Either way, it’s a fun read and I hope you enjoy it.

Always bet on black

Paradise, Nevada

Welcome to the desert

An oasis of people and lights

Where red and black can together make green.

The warm breeze does nothing to cool

and shade is few and far between

People from every town imaginable

and folks from every creed

Try their hand at visiting the home to hundred degree heat

To be momentarily a makeshift celebrity

In the original City of Sin

Sleep doesn’t exist here and why should it?

The sun might as well be another light show

From hotel windows you could look down onto the street

to see the constant streams of people

A parade of individuals with likewise individual dreams.

Though fate and luck are cruel mistresses

this does nothing to stop the brave

For those who do make it here

momentarily their old lives are left behind

A new one is born, stays and lives here.

 

Thanks for reading!

Always bet on black

The Wall XVII: All About Style

 

 

 

Writing Begats Performing And Vice Versa

Hey everyone, Flobito here!

As you may know, I moonlight as an author. If you didn’t know that, I would be completely surprised. I mean, I’ve been at this blog thing for over a year and I always shoehorn in the fact that I’m a writer. I hardly talk about anything else. In fact, before I continue let me get my plug out of the way.

High Desert Run

Get the debut novel from Yours Truly

Anyway, when I’m writing I “perform” the story in my head. I imagine how would my characters act to certain situations if they were real people. This is because they “are” real people to an extent.

This weekend, the tables got turned a bit for me.  Being tapped to perform (I won’t say “star” because it’s a team effort) in my first radio drama, I was tasked with the same job I imagined actors would have to be going through if they had to perform one of my stories. It was just me and a script full of words. My goal was to turn the words into a living, breathing character.

Retro-Microphone

With a great face for radio!

The radio play, called “Supporters” and based on the soccer supporter culture, is something that I can personally identify with. I am a member of a professional soccer supporters group, so researching the subculture wasn’t terribly difficult. With that said, the entire thing wasn’t a walk in the park either. You see, I have a slight speech impediment called “cluttering.” That is to say in certain situations and with certain words I can go into a bit of a fit that usually gets confused for stuttering. This was in the back of my mind in addition to the regular stresses of making sure I hit the right emotional notes for my character as well as knowing my lines well enough where I didn’t sound like a robot when reading them.

And if you read my earlier blog when I talked about my time on radio, it’s something I deal with  all the time. My “radio voice” is distinctly different than my speaking voice in a concentrated attempt to avoid such pitfalls.

Since I did not write or direct the recording of “Supporters”, I had a bit more freedom to just be talent. The fun part for me (as a guy who loves puzzles) was finding out why my character would say they things he would say when he said them. After a while, I was able to put my character on like a “skin” and perform. Whether my performance was good is up to the director and the eventual audience, but I would say it was fun to “go into the booth” for the attempt.

When the recording was over, I was excited. Not only for the work I put in on “Supporters” that day but even for some of my own stuff. Acting things out reminded me what motivations make sense (and what doesn’t) for my own future projects. I recommend to any and all aspiring writers out there: Find out a way to perform your work. Even if it’s just a couple of friends table reading your manuscript over drinks, a lot more things become clearer if you just perform your stories out loud.

Unless you’re writing the sequel to Fifty Shades of Gray. Keep that to yourself ;-)

–Flobo

The Hook and The Look

What’s going on peoples? Flobo here and I’m back once again to talk about those creative endeavors you’re probably undertaking. You know, writing/filmmaking that sort of thing.

Imagine (if you will) that you’ve already created your masterpiece. Your script (or manuscript) is just soooo good, you couldn’t possibly edit it anymore. The public is clamoring to see your magnum opus right at this very moment. Lines have been forming around bookstores for hours…

Copyright FOX

Then you tell them it’s only available as an e-Book

Let me ask you this: What’s the ‘package’ of your work, like? That is to say, your “look &feel” or (mise en scene if we’re talking about film). You know, the aesthetic.

Notice I’m not talking about genre, or even marketing (but all three of these realms kind of bleed into each other). You see, you can offer a product in a certain segment but have an aesthetic that’s different than your competition. For example, there are hundreds of kinds of cola drinks out there, but they all find ways to be different.

Some to varying degrees of success

Some to varying degrees of success

A “supernatural romance” can be the difference between “Twilight”,  and “Beauty and The Beast”. A buddy comedy could be the difference between “The Hangover”, “The Other Guys” and the Cheech and Chong Movies. When you create your story, you ultimately have to ask yourself who is the intended audience. Beyond that, you must find a way to summarize your story so that it not only sounds appealing, but different enough than the other products already on the market. In the film business, they call this THE PITCH.

In your short summary, you are supposed to engage the producer (or audience) enough to get them interested in reading the rest of the work (THE HOOK). When they do decide to take a look at it, they must have enough appreciation in the world you create to stick with the developments within (THE LOOK).

Why are the Hook & Look so important? Well for one, people just don’t have the time to give your work the full chance it deserves, anymore. Some or lazy and others are busy, but most nowadays have to be “prepped” into reading a long form of work. We’ve been conditioned by advertising and it seeps in to all aspects of our psyche. We have to see a trailer before we see the movie. We go to Yelp before checking out a restaurant. We read the preview line in our e-mail inboxes before deciding it is  important enough for a full read. The Hook and The Look are here to stay.

The sad part is, if your story fails on one or two of those accounts, maybe it’s time to rework it a bit.

But I still love you, Crystal Pepsi!

–Flobo

 

Anticipation Paradox

Whattup! Let’s get into this, shall we?

So it’s the end of NaNoWriMo (and the Thanksgiving Holiday) and you wrote your first draft. No, this is not going to be one of those “you have to rewrite your NaNo manuscript” blog posts because frankly 1) it should go without saying and 2) the Internet is crawling with those kinds of articles.

Let’s take it one step further. Let’s say you’ve rewritten your novel, self published it and became a star. Everyone is on pins and needles waiting for the release of your next book. Sure they could have been in chairs, but they are so impressed they asked for the pins and needles BY NAME. You’re a rising star, and so you approach your next book like the Great American (or wherever you’re from) Novel that it is. Now I ask you this: When do you release it?
Now there are some people that would say to release it as soon as possible. You know, “strike when the iron’s hot” and all that. Sometimes that is the best course of action. However since we are coming into an “always on” society thanks to technology, you may run the risk of overexposure. People wore Day-Glo for years but in hindsight it was just a fad we all look back to and shudder.

I thought Jem was a cartoon…?

Spacing your efforts out may be a way to preserve your “brand integrity” and help to establish a longer term career.  The problem arises in finding the balance. You don’t want to wait TOO long, or it may have a damaging effect. Take rapper Nelly for example:

For the record, this story is totally anecdotal.

When I was a teenager going into early adulthood, I was really into rapper Nelly. Sure he had rhymes and a swagger before “swag” was a thing, but I just loved his imagery. I mean one of his songs “Nellyville”  is so creatively described, I can picture it when I close my eyes.

So when his third album came out, I was excited. Well, excited until I understood what was going on. Nelly was to release a double album. However instead of releasing them together, he released them separately (on the same day) with each disc being full price. The albums “Sweat” and “Suit”, separated by subject matter was an obvious cash grab. If you liked street level lyrics you had to buy “Sweat”. If you liked smoother tracks with that signature imagery you had to buy “Suit”. If you were me, you had to buy both:

He mocks me from TWO album covers..

The result? I felt cheated. There was enough decent material from both CDs to be combined to one disk. So when Nelly did this six months later, in the compilation album “Sweatsuit”, I was a little upset. However, since I was still a fan of his work I would have bought the next album because I enjoyed his music. The problem? From the Sweat/Suit albums to his next album “Brass Knuckles”, three years had passed. My tastes changed and while I still like Nelly, he had shifted out of that “Must Buy” category.

I hear the same thing happens to fans of the Dave Matthews Band.

The anticipation time was too great (for this blogger at least). So what’s an aspiring author to do? Well thankfully, you can use the “always on” aspect of our society to your advantage. You can devote your social media advertising platform to one book, and then shift to the second book while you are generating buzz for  its release. Hollywood studios do this all the time for the release of their movies. Whatever you do, just don’t go off the grid completely between releases, it can do more harm than good.

–Flobo

Inside Rectangles

Flobo here and another writer’s blog is coming your way!

In the beginning, the great authors of yesteryear would struggle to come up with that next story. You know, the great novel that everyone has (supposed to have) read? Writer’s block was a problem for those guys and gals even back then. It took a lot of strain to find time to put pen to paper. Some persevered but most didn’t. Those that did were cut from a certain cloth.
Writer’s block is something that writers deal with even to this day. The problem gets worsened by the strides we’ve made as a society in regards to technology.

“No bro, it COMES with the cloud screensaver app!”

You see, I’ve heard stories of that struggling writer that had to go to the wilderness for a weekend to bang out that next plot point. In present times, there is no “wildnerness”, per se. Sure there’s miles of rural areas and places that I would surely die in if left to my own devices, but there’s an almost constant link to civilization.

This past week, I started a new job in an office. Pretty awesome gig, and I’m grateful I have it. I realized my second week in that I had my E-mail open on my workstation, my cellular phone, my laptop and on my tablet running at the same time. When the new mail notifications strolled in, I felt like a chicken with the head cut off, trying to clear the messages from all the machines manually. It was a sad sight. (Sad because it was my personal e-mail and it could’ve waited rather than my work one). I was wired, ready to respond to that Groupon alert at a moment’s notice. Because of this, I almost never gave my mind a chance to wander. Even though this is good as far as focusing for the day job, it stifles the creative side.
What to do? Well the easy answer would be to become a hermit in a cave somewhere. Radical, but entirely possible. May I suggest leaving your laptop, tablet, or cellular phone at home one day? I can hear you cringing from over here and that is kind of my point. Maybe in order to jump start ourselves creatively, we may have to shift our lives on the logical level as well.

 

–Flobo

 

The Sport Of Writing

Hey, it’s Flobo!
So this is what November 2012 feels like, huh? Hmm, I can get used to this, but for no more than thirty or so days. November is typically an important month for writers as it is the National Novel Writing Month a.k.a. NaNoWriMo.

Aww look at that logo. It’s so cute!

 

Gist of it is this. You got thirty days to write a 50,000 word novel. Doesn’t matter how rough it is, just get it done.  The premise sounds challenging enough, but it completely difficult when you actually decide to do it. I’ve done NaNoWriMo twice personally (2010, 2011). Since I completed the 50K word threshold both times, I’ve been deemed a “winner” of the event.

That’s WRITE y’all. A two-time champ!

The exercise is fun, and like running a marathon, it really becomes a matter of will. Writing about two thousand words a day could be a lot (if not outright impossible) if you don’t write much consistently at all. In fact the first time I did NaNoWriMo, I kept my notebook on the floor of my bed. When I woke up I would roll onto the floor and write.  At the end of the day after writing on the floor, I would climb into my bed. I was totally going bohemian. My first NaNo novel (after many drafts) became High Desert Run. 

The second attempt ended with me having a full length version of my superhero story, entitled Silverstreek. I unfortunately was not happy with the direction I took it in that go around, and almost junked the property altogether. I then decided to streamline the novel into a short story (of about 7000 words) for my latest anthology: The Indelible Silverstreek

Two attempts yielded two very different results. You see, everybody knows about the art of writing. Us cynical types are also aware of the commercial side of writing. Events such as NaNoWriMo shine a light on a third element that gets overlooked: The sport of writing.

There should be a thrill of trying to stretch (or squeeze) a story into a certain page count because that’s what happens all the time in the real world. An episode of your favorite TV drama only has 44 mins at a time to tell a story, and there’s not a lot of room to deviate from a strict structure. Motivating yourself to actually turn on a switch and go into “writer’s mode” is something than can only benefit you in the long run. “Training drills” like NaNo strengthen your skills for your other projects. Everyone can throw a basketball into a net, but an NBA player has a certain skillset that most of us don’t have.

 

It reminds me of that filmmaker who has all the ideas for the next great movie “in his head”. Well, you know what they say. An idea in your head is as good as the paper it’s written on. I’ll take someone who has a proof of concept over someone with just an idea any day of the week. :-)

 

It’s NaNoWriMo dudes. Rock On!

 

–Flobo

 

Hey everybody, Flobo here.

Technically as I write this, I am on vacation. Instead of  being in my small soulless apartment in Los Angeles, I am typing this on my laptop while munching on free food due me visiting my parents in Brooklyn. For those of you that don’t know, I am a full-blooded Brooklynite, full stop. I carry this with a sense of pride, because my brethren are tough, hard working, punctual, and style conscious individuals that are unique when compared to any other town. Due to consolidation in the end of the 19th century, Brooklyn is technically a part of the City of  New York . However we have a culture and an energy all of our own.

So when I travel and people ask me if I’m from New York, I would say: (Hint: It’s the title of this post)

 I’m Not From New York, I’m From Brooklyn. There’s a Difference.

I grew up in Brooklyn. Went to school in Brooklyn. Got into my first fight and fell in love with my first crush in Brooklyn. I would venture to the other boroughs (which include Queens, Manhattan aka The City, The Bronx and Staten Island) but not if I didn’t have a particular reason.  Simply put, my hometown shaped me to the person I am today.

Even the bridge to town stands out.

 

This weekend I ran the NY10K in Prospect Park. The race was fun, and I got to run around pretending as if I was some star athlete who “returned to his hometown to win the big one”. Well, did I win? I came in 2700th place out of 4200 so I consider it a victory….. Yay!

 

Okay, so what does that have to do with your writing? Your characters are people, living breathing people with drives and desires. And sure, we as authors love to go into backstories in explaining a character’s fears or skeletons, but not much time is spent in making their hometown a “character” in the piece. I’ve read countless detective stories where the big city (usually New York or Los Angeles) is portrayed as a character; a living breathing entity for our hero to meander through, but when discussing the past of a character, his or her her hometown usually gets written off in a sentence or two. It is as almost the character was born in a void, usually indicative of the author’s imagination.

What I am saying is–especially in longer form works– is that you should  spend sometime to develop the hometown of your characters. Let your readers “feel” the struggles of being born in Omaha, Nebraska.

 

Or the mean streets of Sheboygan…

 

Have your character have a certain pride where there are from. Like me this past weekend, it may factor in their motivations in your stories.

Our “Main Street”

 

–Flobo

Alma Maters and Writing

Hey everybody! Flobo here and today I want to go back to school!
Actually no. I did the school thing for literally twenty years straight. I. AM. DONE.

That’s right. Through my years of grade school, college, and eventually grad/film school, I can tell you that education is important but it is a killer. As a struggling artist I can also tell you that school is an investment that you may not see the returns on for years after you jailbreak, either. This is also the reason I’ve never done any “Big Brother” type speeches to high school kids. Personally, I can tell you it is getting harder to sell them on something that is going to leave them multiple thousands of dollars in debt.
But I digress.

No matter what school you end up going to, if you’re like me, you’ve gotten something in the mail that asks/requests/begs you to donate back to the college. The conventional wisdom is this: Since the school has nourished your academic and/or creative spirit, it is your responsibility to ensure the school in question is able to to that for future generations.

Or at least, make sure the landscaping bill is paid for

Cynical people like myself don’t see it that way. I remember when I graduated from college (the first time) like it was yesterday. Sitting in a stuffy gymnasium on a humid morning in April while wearing my black graduation robe, I wanted to do nothing but get out of there and run to the nearest ice cream shop. By the time the alumni association representative got on stage and asked for their first donation (because we were now alums you see) there were enough audible titters and groans from the crowd to  throw the poor lady off her speech. The thought process being, “Hey. We just got out. A lot of us are thousands in debt, and now you want MORE money?”

I felt the same way too. That is, until I went to graduate school. Man, talk about an impersonal educational experience. In fact, I respected what my undergraduate school had done for me only after I went to a school that charged twice as much and gave me half of the service. You know, I should do a blog on my grad/film school one day. Anyway, so when I get a “please donate” card from my undergrad, I felt compelled to give back to the institution of higher learning that shaped me into who I am today.

 

I’m just too poor to donate.

It’s all counterfeit…

So you may not know this, but I am part of a eBook reviewing site. Essentially I download press copies of eBooks, I read them and review them. I don’t get paid, but on the flip side I get to read eBooks from other independent authors for free. Well, why do I do this? For one (and sticking with the school analogy) I feel as if I’m “giving back”. I am a writer with my books available online, but if I don’t read others (no matter the circumstance) how can I expect people to read “The Indelible Silverstreek” or “Mass Transit” ? Secondly, there’s a chance to see trends in writing styles. A generation ago, the average novel was dense; written in such a way that you had to fight the book to have any sort of comprehension. These days? Accessibility is the key. I can almost guarantee you that the “Twilight” books wouldn’t have been published a generation ago. This also helps with spotting (and avoiding) trends. If you’re over vampires maybe you can write about samurai. If you think wizards are still big, maybe you can throw your hat into the arena.

 

What I am saying is, even though you are a writer (or screenwriter,musician, artist, poet, etc), it is only fair to “give back”. Maybe for noble reasons or maybe just to get those ever elusive “karma points”, it’s okay to both create and consume your given craft.

 

–Flobo

Writing in a Nutshell

That’s me on the right. Didn’t get my coffee in time..

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