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Crafting Your Entourage

Hey peoples, whattup!

Quickie post this week as I am in the middle of one of the best birthday weekends ever. (Nah seriously June 25 should be a national holiday) As always, I want to chat with you about the almighty pen, no mater which medium you use to express yourself. Today, I want to talk to you about one of the hardest things to actually pull off: The Ensemble Piece.

 

In the beginning there was the protagonist. He/She/It was your hero. The reader would follow their adventures and everything was gravy. This gave rise to the antagonist, or the villain. Complicating life for your hero, strong villains make your novels/screenplays/short stories that much better. But what about multiple heroes? What about multiple villains? What about multiple characters with goals of varying degrees on the protagonist/antagonist scale?

You may think this picture is unrelated, but looking back you are going to lauuuuuughhhh……

 

One of my favorite shows of all time was HBO’s “Entourage”, even though the reason why changed from season to season. In it’s first two seasons, the show was a side-splitting satirical look about the Hollywood Machine told in such a dry way you questioned whether or not it was real. As the seasons progressed, the show started to dip in to “dramedy” (or even melodrama) territory. When it was over, it’s eighth season finale wasn’t the strongest, but by that point I had watched every single episode. Why?

The strength of the characters. Not only onto themselves, but the chemistry the characters had with each other. The five main guys of the show had their own flaws, demons, and personality quirks and they interacted with other people in the shared universe without sacrificing their character integrity. “Entourage” was a rare show you could watch and say “I’m Vinny Chase. You’re Ari….. and that guy over there? Drama. Total Drama.”

 

Sidenote: I do a decent Drama impression. Ask me about it sometime.

 

As an author, I think it easier to create a world around a single character. This tends to be problematic in detective fiction, where the sole cop hero is an implausible  genius living in a world of idiots. This is known as “overwriting”, and  trust me I’ll get to it one day. Creating a world with true three dimensional people without  them feeling like sidekicks is another skill altogether. Sure “Entourage” was based around Vinny Chase, but you could have easily have episodes featuring Turtle (especially if they didn’t end the “Lim-Hos” storyline so abruptly), or  featured an entire show around Ari Gold.

 

I hear that there’s a female version of this called “Sex And The City”. But as a man, I say it’s probably a myth. :-P

 

As always keep writing. As for me, I’m in editing mode. Trying to push for the “Book4″ project to completed and on your eBook shelves in time for Christmas. Because everyone knows,  EPUB files make a great gift.

 

 

–Flobo

Uh-Oh, Here Comes The Police!

You don’t have to look far if you are in the mood to watch a cop show on television or  a hard-boiled adventure flick. Police procedurals are everywhere, and even though the name implies that the show should lean on the boring side, it looks like the sheer amount of them are not going away anytime soon.

 

 

I'm actually *puts on sunglasses* immortal... YYYEEEEAAAAHHHHH!

 

But why?  Why are police procedurals (and by extension regular cop dramas and mysteries) so popular, especially on the small screen? It’s no secret that mystery is my favorite genre so maybe I can provide some insight.

First and foremost, your audience can PLAY ALONG. Mysteries are like a roller coaster rides in that everyone jumps on the same starting point and everyone has the same ending point, but the audience is down to “enjoy the ride”. The more pretzel loops and corkscrew turns (as written by twists and red herrings) are completely up to you, but that is what makes it fun for the writer. As for the audience, there is a subconscious sense of justice when they witness your protagonist haul away the suspect to jail. It is as almost they were “deputized” and did their part for justice.

 

 

But you don't get a gun. Sorry Charlie

 

Police procedurals are what I like to call “The Great Sandbox” for writers. I can’t think of a formula (Crime—Witness—Apprehend Suspect—Interrogate Suspect—Make Arrest) and character archetypes (Broken Veteran Cop, Wide-eyed Rookie Cop, Overworked Police Captain, Ignored Spouse of cop) that are so well-worn like the police procedural genre.

 

It kind of reminds me when I had a big toy box when I was a  kid. My parents didn’t buy many new toys often, so when it was play time, I had to make up new games with the toys I had. My silver toy Ferrari was just a car but one week it was a racing machine, the week after that it flew and shot lasers out of his canon. There was no changing the shape of the car (after all it was made out of diecast metal) but I got to bend the rules in order to make playtime fresh.This subgenre is no different. A broken cop who is corrupt and sold secrets for cash, is a lot different than the broken cop who buries himself in his work because his/her spouse died. You get to play with the classic permutations and computations of character traits and relationships while all the while there is a crime that needs to be solved in the background.

 

Look, humans are by nature curious animals. We know this. There is going to be a need for fictional sleuths for a long time. If you have some extra time between projects, why not banging out a mystery short story? If you’re like me, you’ll enjoy keeping your skills sharp, and if you are a first timer you’ll enjoy the change of pace…

 

–Flobo

Heroes and Villains

Heroes And Villains

It’s been said that “Without Judas, there would be no Jesus.” Now sparing you a religious/ethical debate, partly because I am ignorant in both, the world’s greatest and timeless stories are derived by a hero (including his/her ideals) or “Protagonist”, versus a villain (and his/her ideals) or “Antagonist”.

Of course who is the hero or the villain comes down to perception and point of view. For example, let’s imagine I’m spilling my guts about my ex-girlfriend to you at a bar. I tell you that I came home from work to find my babycakes cheating on me. Well, in my version of the story, I’m the hero and my ex is the villain (due to her actions). Let’s say my ex-girlfriend is in the same bar the next day and is telling you (who apparently lives at this bar) her side of the story. She says that a census guy came to the house to conduct an interview and before he could ask a question I storm in the house, throw a tantrum, and leave. Is my ex-babycakes still the villain?

Perception.

Your hero is only as strong as his/her villain. It’s a twist on that whole “chain is only as strong as its weakest link” axiom. This time the chain is your screenplay or manuscript, and your characters (and plot points) are the links. One dimensional villains are a surefire way to undercut your entire piece in one fell swoop.

Evil heavyset guys wearing a cloak and top-hat twirling their mustaches went out with silent films. This is problem that affected films in the up until the 80s. Your mercenary hero (Like Stallone’s “Rambo”, or Schwarzenegger’s “Commando”) would be plopped in some exotic locale and they would lay waste to hundreds of extras on his way to their particular goal. Now, this still happens in films (See Liam Neeson’s “Taken”) but by the end of the 80s, people were becoming jaded. They wanted to see their heroes in danger. Now, the best way to do this is to strengthen your villain.

In the late 80s, heroes were getting hurt. This had a chain reaction effect, as screenwriters tried to rationalize why would someone who got dominated by the villain in first and second acts would continue on their quest while struggling to stay alive. This gave rise to what’s known as the Anti-hero. Now, Anti-hero characters have been around since the days of Greek theater. Hollywood, however really embraced the trait in mainstream films starting in the late 1980s. In fact, the original “Die Hard” film is seen as one of the vanguards for the phenomena.

If you haven’t seen the film, you should. Instead of being a guy who took down soldiers without breaking a sweat, “Die Hard”‘s John McClane…well, broke more than a sweat..

Anti-heroes are a littler harder to write because you as the author have to present your audience a good reason why the hero would forgo his status quo and partake in the story. Hack writers have done this many of times. The most cliched way works like this:

G-man: Jack Amazing, the government needs your help on this mission.
Jack: I told you, I’m retired.
G-man: I understand. But if you do this, your criminal record will be wiped clean.
Jack: *Growls* I’m in. But this is the last time… You know, unless there are sequels.

A guilty favorite of mine, “2Fast2Furious” works that plotline to a tee. Also check out “The Rundown”.

Many writers (understandably) regulate their villains to a plotpoint/or MacGuffin. You see, in a 120 page screenplay you are on average going to have the hero on screen for 75-85 of those pages. Just say Mr. X wants to take over to world and let the good guy get to work. No back-story? no problem!

Television cop dramas do this often. You see, an average hour-long cop drama TV show isn’t an hour at all. After commercials each episode runs about 39-44 minutes on average. A lot of times, these shows have to run on short-hand to move the story along. For example, if some girl dies of a drug overdose in act one and the cops have to interrogate the drug dealer to make him snitch on the drug lord, instead of giving the dealer a proper back story, a lot of times a minority is cast (wearing appropriate gang-related colors, bandannas or head-ties). This tells the audience “he’s bad news, just trust us”, so they can move on to the next dramatic beat. This doesn’t affect white actors as much. Usually if a white male (wearing modest middle class clothes) is brought into a interrogation, they are usually a victim of coercion from someone else or they have incredibly bad luck. The exception being pedophiles. For some reason pedophiles are almost always white guys on TV and…

….I’m getting off topic.

Anyway, the hardest character type to pull off in my humble opinion is the anti-villain. Arguably the newest archetype of the four, it’s someone who is the bad guy but usually against their will or someone who is doing heroic things but is still being perceived as the villain. Back to the cop show example, the Internal Affairs Bureau rep, (the officer responsible for making sure the other cops are working within the law) are usually hated by the other (non-internal affairs) cops for just doing their jobs. Forrest Whitaker’s character from “The Shield”, Jon Kavanaugh is a top notch example of this. Seriously *jumping on soapbox*

“The Shield” is one of the best works of fiction. Period.

*Off soapbox*

A more comical example: If I walk into Los Angeles wearing a black T-shirt with a crossed out marijuana leaf with the words “Illegalize It” written underneath it, any bet I would need a police escort home. Unless the police were in on it too. Can’t be too sure, they have nightsticks.

This November, It’s the National Novel Writing Competition month, aka NaNoWriMo. I’m taking a crack at it, and I hope the preceding has got you in the mood to try it yourself.

–Flobo

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