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Anticipation Paradox

Whattup! Let’s get into this, shall we?

So it’s the end of NaNoWriMo (and the Thanksgiving Holiday) and you wrote your first draft. No, this is not going to be one of those “you have to rewrite your NaNo manuscript” blog posts because frankly 1) it should go without saying and 2) the Internet is crawling with those kinds of articles.

Let’s take it one step further. Let’s say you’ve rewritten your novel, self published it and became a star. Everyone is on pins and needles waiting for the release of your next book. Sure they could have been in chairs, but they are so impressed they asked for the pins and needles BY NAME. You’re a rising star, and so you approach your next book like the Great American (or wherever you’re from) Novel that it is. Now I ask you this: When do you release it?
Now there are some people that would say to release it as soon as possible. You know, “strike when the iron’s hot” and all that. Sometimes that is the best course of action. However since we are coming into an “always on” society thanks to technology, you may run the risk of overexposure. People wore Day-Glo for years but in hindsight it was just a fad we all look back to and shudder.

I thought Jem was a cartoon…?

Spacing your efforts out may be a way to preserve your “brand integrity” and help to establish a longer term career.  The problem arises in finding the balance. You don’t want to wait TOO long, or it may have a damaging effect. Take rapper Nelly for example:

For the record, this story is totally anecdotal.

When I was a teenager going into early adulthood, I was really into rapper Nelly. Sure he had rhymes and a swagger before “swag” was a thing, but I just loved his imagery. I mean one of his songs “Nellyville”  is so creatively described, I can picture it when I close my eyes.

So when his third album came out, I was excited. Well, excited until I understood what was going on. Nelly was to release a double album. However instead of releasing them together, he released them separately (on the same day) with each disc being full price. The albums “Sweat” and “Suit”, separated by subject matter was an obvious cash grab. If you liked street level lyrics you had to buy “Sweat”. If you liked smoother tracks with that signature imagery you had to buy “Suit”. If you were me, you had to buy both:

He mocks me from TWO album covers..

The result? I felt cheated. There was enough decent material from both CDs to be combined to one disk. So when Nelly did this six months later, in the compilation album “Sweatsuit”, I was a little upset. However, since I was still a fan of his work I would have bought the next album because I enjoyed his music. The problem? From the Sweat/Suit albums to his next album “Brass Knuckles”, three years had passed. My tastes changed and while I still like Nelly, he had shifted out of that “Must Buy” category.

I hear the same thing happens to fans of the Dave Matthews Band.

The anticipation time was too great (for this blogger at least). So what’s an aspiring author to do? Well thankfully, you can use the “always on” aspect of our society to your advantage. You can devote your social media advertising platform to one book, and then shift to the second book while you are generating buzz for  its release. Hollywood studios do this all the time for the release of their movies. Whatever you do, just don’t go off the grid completely between releases, it can do more harm than good.

–Flobo

Being Your Protagonist

Hey  everyone, Flobo here! Back from my writer’s retreat and in the middle of Script Frenzy (but haven’t started yet), I figure I drop another post.

We’ve talked about this before, but we are all guilty at some point of basing a character in our works after ourselves. Whether consciously or subconsciously (or unconsciously) our characters tend to act, think, bleed just like us. Obviously this isn’t always a hundred percent true, but then again your audience usually finds the similarities quicker than you do.

“Flobo, you made your main guy ruggedly handsome, smart, and an excellent lover. What gives?”

But this blog post is asking about the opposite. Have you ever tried basing yourself after your characters? Have you ever developed an alter-ego for the page only to fall in love how he/she handled “their business” in that world? Have you ever been a situation and asked yourself, “Man, if so-and-so were here, this would go down differently?”

No waiting in line at the DMV for me!!!!

I offer you up a story. Forgive me for this story not being totally about writing but hey, I’ll try  to tie it together at the end.

This past weekend, I participated in the Southern California Warrior Dash. A 3 mile obstacle course, the pièce de résistance was traversing through a mud pit after swimming in fairly cold water to hop over buoy-like obstacles. It was challenging for this guy but not impossible, so I’m more than sure you elite athletes that read these things could do it. Anyway, since I attended the race by my lonesome, I really had no one to banter the nervous energy with. I mean, I could  have talked to myself but that would just look odd.

You know, because when I talk to myself, I usually put my bluetooth-headset in my ear so I don’t look super crazy.

But here’s were things got interesting. Instead of being committed to a mental hospital, I pretended as if I was some athlete on a sports television broadcast before, during, and after the race. Have you ever watched an EPSN or a Fox Sports broadcast? During the pregame show people in suits discuss the game of the week, while the camera grabs footage of the star-athlete practicing, signing autographs, taking pictures with fans, or just being in the zone. I pretended that theoretically millions of people where tuning in to see me do my thing.

Sort of like this guy. But you know, he has talent.

Unlike most of the races I’ve done, I didn’t bring my iPod (for obvious muddy reasons), so I really didn’t have anything else to go on. Thing is, the “Fake Game Of The Week” method actually worked. There was times out there where I wanted to quit. (The horizontal climb and the aforementioned icy swim comes to mind) I just thought what if Kobe, Ichiro, Tiger, or LD just walked off the field in the middle of the game? There would be no respect given, and (duh!) there would go all of that endorsement money.

The mental game actually became semi-realized. After the race, you were allowed to go back down to the river to wash the mud off. I took off my shirt (Don’t worry, I had another underneath because I didn’t want the ladies to swoon TOO much) and wrung it out in the water, washing off most of the mud. When I got back to the finisher’s village, a lady stopped me and asked if I was willing to donate my racing clothes to charity. Without hesitation, possibly due to  elation for finishing and exhaustion for …er…finishing, I gave her my racing shirt. In my head, I heard:

“And there he is, giving his jersey to an appreciative fan. What a class act!”

So often we try to work on the mechanics of writing, that we forget that our imaginations could do so much more. I climbed not one but THREE rope walls that day because I was using the thoughts in my mind as natural fuel. It’s a powerful thing, and it’s one of the beautiful things about writing that is almost impossible to articulate accurately.

Now, will I go home and write a story about an athlete that overcame the odds? No, but no one would fault me if I did.  What I learned Saturday was a little deeper than that. How many alter-egos does the average author have? Hmmmmmm.

I call this guy "Happy McGentle"

Until next time, Happy Writings….

–Flobo

Character Vs. Story

Hey yo!

Are you a creative person? Of course you are. Everybody is special in their own way. Or so that’s what they told me in kindergarten. Anyway, you creative people you, let me you ask you a question. Have you ever thought to yourself about a great idea for a movie/book/sketch/ballad? Did you ever put that idea into action. If you want to submit your idea to the pantheon of All Things Awesome, you are going to have to write it down. I’m serious here. An idea “in your head” is as good as the paper it’s written on.

Okay, okay. So you have your idea and you are going to write it down. Now what?

Flobito.com Presents: Character Vs. Story

During my three year “tour” of film school, the one thing the emphasized the most was story. Without a good story, your film (in this case) would be dead in the water. Romeo and Juliet for example is one of the most adapted stories of all time.

A solid story will take your audience along for the ride with them wanting to see how the story ends. For example, in my second book,“Mass Transit”, the short story of “The Groomsman” was every story driven.

I was at a wedding a couple of years ago where I was a groomsman. While standing around with a wool suit on a very muggy wedding day, I said to myself that I felt like I was some sort of bodyguard, always in the bridegroom’s photos like I was his protection. I wondered about the situations in which a bodyguard would have to protect a groom at a wedding and that evolved into the finished product of “The Groomsman,” a quirky dramedy…

In the finished product, city cab driver and husband-to-be Adam Colby witnesses a murder first hand by an unstable man who promises Adam that if he tells anyone about what he saw, he wasn’t going to make it to his own wedding day. Adam, taking a friend’s advice enlists the help of Drake Howell, a bodyguard with his own quirks.

The summer blockbuster “Inception” seems to be very story driven, because the characters in that piece are just props. That’s right, I said it! Boo me, suckers! Anyway, the point I’m trying to make is that if you give your creative idea a solid story foundation, you can go places.

However, the other side of that coin is to start with your character first. Before I explain that, I would like to say that both character and story are not mutually exclusive, you can excel at both.

Character centric stories tend to be more personal, as fully fleshed out characters tend to alienate people who disagree with the character’s principles sometimes. This is totally fine, because frankly people have their own individual tastes. But if your audience roots for your character (as in the protagonist/hero or antagonist/villain) they’ll support the story, even if it is weak at parts.

In my first book, “By The Ounce And Other Tales”, the eponymous story was about an unlucky-at-love guy named Perry who got rejected by the girl of his dreams and…..

Let me just stop right here for a moment. How many of us have been rejected by someone they liked? That alone would have people jumping on your bandwagon. It’s the reason why people like Michael Cera have careers people. Anyway,

…totally giving up on life he meets a traveling salesman named Lou that offers poor Perry an aphrodisiac that is sure to change his fortune. Now, “By The Ounce” was really a character piece about not so much the loser Perry, but the Lou, the traveling salesman. In the story, he claims that human emotions are not “feelings” but chemical reactions and that he sells synthetic replicas of said chemical reactions….wait for it….By The Ounce.

Lou (Named Lou C. Offer in the first couple of drafts) is actually a send up to life coaches and dating doctors that populate the American zeitgeist. You see I, like maybe some of you, have bought self-help books and dating books in order to help me with confidence. Confidence is something you can’t realistically get from a book as it comes from within. These dating gurus are in fact selling something that you already have. Shrewd, no? So using that as a character base, Lou became an experiment about what kind of person would actually sell human emotions (something we’re all born with) back to humans for a profit.

There’s a story there, but the ‘story behind the story’ is learning about Lou and his desires/drives/motives.

Thinking about a situation (story) or person (character) are both strong ways to start your creative endeavor. Don’t think you have to be locked with one or the other either. Mix and match and find the right balance for you.

Oh, and when you write your screenplay/novel/song/web series, I’ll take a finder’s fee.

Just kidding……..Sorta,

–Flobo

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