Archive for June, 2012


Crafting Your Entourage

Hey peoples, whattup!

Quickie post this week as I am in the middle of one of the best birthday weekends ever. (Nah seriously June 25 should be a national holiday) As always, I want to chat with you about the almighty pen, no mater which medium you use to express yourself. Today, I want to talk to you about one of the hardest things to actually pull off: The Ensemble Piece.

 

In the beginning there was the protagonist. He/She/It was your hero. The reader would follow their adventures and everything was gravy. This gave rise to the antagonist, or the villain. Complicating life for your hero, strong villains make your novels/screenplays/short stories that much better. But what about multiple heroes? What about multiple villains? What about multiple characters with goals of varying degrees on the protagonist/antagonist scale?

You may think this picture is unrelated, but looking back you are going to lauuuuuughhhh……

 

One of my favorite shows of all time was HBO’s “Entourage”, even though the reason why changed from season to season. In it’s first two seasons, the show was a side-splitting satirical look about the Hollywood Machine told in such a dry way you questioned whether or not it was real. As the seasons progressed, the show started to dip in to “dramedy” (or even melodrama) territory. When it was over, it’s eighth season finale wasn’t the strongest, but by that point I had watched every single episode. Why?

The strength of the characters. Not only onto themselves, but the chemistry the characters had with each other. The five main guys of the show had their own flaws, demons, and personality quirks and they interacted with other people in the shared universe without sacrificing their character integrity. “Entourage” was a rare show you could watch and say “I’m Vinny Chase. You’re Ari….. and that guy over there? Drama. Total Drama.”

 

Sidenote: I do a decent Drama impression. Ask me about it sometime.

 

As an author, I think it easier to create a world around a single character. This tends to be problematic in detective fiction, where the sole cop hero is an implausible  genius living in a world of idiots. This is known as “overwriting”, and  trust me I’ll get to it one day. Creating a world with true three dimensional people without  them feeling like sidekicks is another skill altogether. Sure “Entourage” was based around Vinny Chase, but you could have easily have episodes featuring Turtle (especially if they didn’t end the “Lim-Hos” storyline so abruptly), or  featured an entire show around Ari Gold.

 

I hear that there’s a female version of this called “Sex And The City”. But as a man, I say it’s probably a myth. :-P

 

As always keep writing. As for me, I’m in editing mode. Trying to push for the “Book4″ project to completed and on your eBook shelves in time for Christmas. Because everyone knows,  EPUB files make a great gift.

 

 

–Flobo

The Price Of Being Creative

Whattup party peoples and superstars? Flobo here and of course I want to talk to you about something relating to the writing craft.  Wait, don’t leave! Awwww.

 

There’s been a raging debate with independent authors such as your truly about the price we should charge for an eBook. Charge too much and no one will take a chance on you, charge too little and you sell your creative efforts short. The general public is more willing to roll with a higher price for a traditional book (from an unknown author) than they are an eBook, plain and simple. When my first book, By The Ounce was available for ten dollars the general consensus was “Hmm, not bad”. When “High Desert Run” was released for 1.99 a good portion of people I knew balked at the price. Were they stupidhead cheapskates? Yes, but it wasn’t their fault.

“Hmm, I don’t know. How about I give you a $1.75 and a old Bruce Lee T-shirt?”

 

Barring fame, I made a pact with myself to release my ebooks for no more than 3 dollars (but more than $1). Why? Well, even though I’ve been writing for years, I am just starting out in the public’s eyes. I remember two months ago I bought an eBook for six dollars, and I had that sense of self doubt I get only when I’m gambling money away (or dropping my car off at the mechanic — I swear those guys make up stuff sometimes). Business wise this makes sense. People associate eBooks with apps, and they won’t usually pay more than an “app price” for a book.

Now the creative side of me has to deal with this, however. The months spent writing and editing  is a lot of hard work, though this should go without saying. “High Desert Run” took me a year, and seeing it on sale for two dollars is a little disheartening. It’s a pride issue for that side of my brain. This is the reason why I refuse to sell my books for .99 cents. It’s like making sure you’re not the worst dressed at a party and settling for being the second worst.

Or you don’t want to be seen as poor for buying the cheapest wine, so you end up buying the second cheapest.

But what about other creative endeavors? My heart goes out to photographers and (since I live in the Los Angeles area these days) videographers. It takes a lot to run those types of businesses, and they have a lot of overhead. Whether it is equipment, delivery expendables, payment to employees (if necessary), it is not a walk in the park.

Which is good for this guy because he was born without eyes.

 

Much like how the digital revolution has caused every Joe and Schmoe to call themselves “photographers”, putting them on a sole mission to undercut the prices of everyone else, indie authors are pretty much in the same boat. Now, I don’t claim to be the best writer out there (in fact a purpose of this blog is to display my “skillz” in hopes that you do actually buy one of my books one day) but there are loads of authors with a shaky grasp of the English language crowding the marketplace with eBooks of their own. I’m all about the free market and competition, but a lot of these self-proclaimed “authors” sour the experience for everybody.

Graphic designers, animators, and music composers know exactly what I’m talking about. How are you supposed to do what you love (or make enough to eat) when someone is out there with claims of comparable quality is willing to do it for much less?

1) Don’t undercut yourself. Offer prices that you think are a good value, but not to the point where your business isn’t sustainable. If you’re good, people may come around even though it may take some time.

2) Marketing Because you aren’t the cheapest, you are going to have to find other ways to stick out. There’s somethings I buy that I don’t care about brand quality and I just want the cheapest (like buying a mouse for my PC laptop for example) and there’s other things I buy for the brand regardless of the price (like Tide detergent. Again, another personal example)

3) Offer something you can’t get anywhere else. When I was in college, the radio station I worked for (10,000 Watts, 500K reach) couldn’t compete with the commercial radio stations in the area. What we did was offer album cuts of the artists that was playing on the competition. The artists  were getting the same amount of love at their station, but folks listened to us because that rare B-side that was only available in Japan was blasting throughout the airwaves.

 

Nobody ever said that working in the creative arts was easy, and it’s trials and tribulations make perfect memoir fuel. It is a necessary evil, that’s for sure.

 

–Flobo

KATANA: Coming Soon

It’s coming! In just ten days, the short film KATANA will have it’s World Premiere in San Diego!

Katana is a story about a woman with her own brand of  justice.

Directed by Rolando Joseph Herrera and produced by Scrawny Strange Productions in association with 619 Villain Studios, “Katana” is a gritty tale about the lengths we go to for someone we really care about.

Come see and vote for “Katana” in the “Audience Choice” category at the screening. Find out how by clicking here.

It was an honor for me to be a part of the team as the screenwriter and I’m hoping you all enjoy it if you just so happen to be in the San Diego area on June 25th.

Check out a sample of the Katana Score:

Katana Score Sample

Gather ‘Round. I Got a Story

What’s shakin’ everybody? Flobo here!

 

Today I want to talk to you about story. Now, we’ve talked about story before as it relates  to being a jumping off point for your writing, but today I actually would like to get more specific (and talk about video games).

“He’s got an at-tit-tude~”

When I was a kid (and I’m dating myself), my favorite video game of all time was Sonic the Hedgehog. This presented a problem as I had the original Nintendo, but that’s another topic for another time. There was something so cool about watching the blue blur racing through the roller-coaster like levels in pursuit of the end. Caution? That was for pot-bellied plumbers.

Who built this city?!

 

As a kid I didn’t care so much for the story of Sonic though. When I became a “big kid” (ages 8-10, or pre-pre teen) I understood it a little more: Evil Dr. Robotnik (or Dr. Eggman ….yawn) wants to mechanize the forest and does so by capturing the animals living on Planet Mobius and converts them to robots. Our plucky Sonic has a mission to free his friends from the machines and take the good doctor down. This was a just a license to jump on robots and go really fast, but the story works here. As Sonic the Hedgehog games got stories that were more and more complex (Sonic Adventure 2- Sonic 2006) the character and the overall story suffered. Nobody cared about bums like Silver the Hedgehog and saving Princess Elise, they wanted  their old friend back.

 

On the other hand:

That looks like a game the whole family can enjoy!

 

Grand Theft Auto started off as a top down (think the perspective Mapquest gives you) city adventure featuring characters that were no bigger than blips on your screen. Sure the game was about doing nefarious things like boosting cars, firing guns, and gang warfare, but the audience was so far removed from the action, it’s Mature rating would just seem like overreacting by today’s standards.

As Grand Theft Auto matured, their stories got more and more complex as well. In this case, it actually benefited the franchise. Sure the third Grand Theft Auto was the first of its kind, but it was Grand Theft Auto: Vice City that “changed the game” sort of speak. The game brought a aesthetic that was Miami in the late ’80s and gamers, as reviewers like to say, where whisked away in a “totally immersive” world. You want to jack a Ferrari clone, mow down people on the sidewalk, run off a cliff, and jump out the car while wielding a sword on the way down? You can, in 3D!!

 

Your books, novels, comics, and poems are in the same boat here. The stories you create can be as a simple as a Sonic the Hedgehog game circa 1993 (Evil guy is evil, go get him good guy!), or could be as a thorough as a late model Grand Theft Auto game (which totes a script that is about one THOUSAND pages long), just as long as the content you are providing is engaging. There is a difference in picking up a 200 page breezy, “page turner” and a 450 page “epic adventure” sure, however you shouldn’t let your perceived complexity of any story stop you from writing the story you want to tell.

That is, unless you have an editor that is imposing a hard page count. Well in that case, you’re screwed ;-)

 

Until next time, keep writing,

 

–Flobo

 

 

I Got Sunshine In A Bag

Whattup everyone! Pleasant surprise for me today as I was nominated by the ever classy and worldly Emme, for the Sunshine Blogger’s Award. See?

Whoo, now time to sit back on my laurels, right? NO! To actually be eligible to receive my award, I have to put some work in:

 

 

The Sunshine Blog Award is a price awarded to “bloggers who positively and creatively inspire others in the blogosphere.” As an award winner, there are a few rules to follow:

  • Link the award to the person(s) who gave it to you.
  • Answer the questions that come with it.
  • Pass it along to 10 people and let them know they have received it.

 

Man, I’m trying to be a mystery here! Okay, ask away….

The Questions and answers:

  • Favorite Number: 25 or 11 or 9 in that order
  • Favorite nonalcoholic drink: Cherry Limeade, y’all!
  • Facebook or Twitter: Both! But I guess I’m more inclined to speak my mind on Twitter more than Facebook.
  • My passion: Wish I had one….But I like to write.
  • Favorite pattern: Herringbone. Reminds me of the upholstery of my Dad’s old ’87 Camry
  • Favorite Day of the Week: These days they all run together…. But historically, Friday.
  • Favorite Flower: Tulips

My nomination for The Sunshine Awards are (in no particular order):

Half-Hippie

SportCast Zone 

Discover Soccer

Expat to Motherhood: Confessions of a Jewish Stay At Home Mom

Cleaver of God

 

Eating Like a Five-Year Old

21 Days of Change

Welcome to the Allyverse

Scrawny Strange Productions

The Massacre Twins

 

Oh before I forget, here’s my acceptance speech:

“Thanks”

Keep writing

–Flobo

Writing Your Least Favorite Genre

Hey everyone, Flobo here. Another week, another post. Let’s get into it, shall we?

As a writer, I take great pride in being able to write  multiple genres. Not that I don’t have my preferences, but if I were to be contracted to write a vampire piece for example, I would feel confident enough to take a crack at a draft. It’s a skill you need to have if you go into the field of television writing as well. “CSI” is essentially cop show, but they spend twenty minutes an episode learning about a certain subculture relating to the crime (dog shows, video game players, cougar moms etc.). Despite all of that, growing up there was one genre however I had always despised. The Western.

Look at that. All beautiful and crap…

Westerns are one of the more enduring genres of film, television and books. The United States, long standing for the land of opportunity, have always looked back fondly during the Old West time period. There was wide open spaces, there were brave men and women braving the unknown, there was adventure to be had within our borders. It was a much simpler time, especially judging by today’s standards. Westerns had their idealistic phase (square jawed cowboys with perfect teeth riding into towns after fighting off the “savage” natives), it’s ironic phase (in the Spaghetti Western movement), and it’s darker phase (in the Revisionist Western subgenre). For some reason, I just couldn’t identify with the genre or its conventions on the whole. In my city upbringing,  we didn’t play “Cowboys and Indians”, we played “Cops and Robbers” (Well actually, we played “NYPD and Minorities”, but I’m trying to be PC here), and I for one only saw a horse when the circus was in town. Though I don’t identify with science fiction in that way either, at least sci-fi yielded that sense of wonder that the Western genre didn’t have.

Because I just looooove movies with long static shots of the empty desert for minutes on end.

As I got older I was trained in analytical thinking for film criticism. I realized that there were lots of things I could pull from westerns, even though the overall genre was a giant bore.  My first novel “High Desert Run” is what’s known as a Neo-Western. Neo (or Contemporary) Westerns take themes and ideas from the classic western genre and brings them to the present day. Now your idea of amoral heroes, treacherous women, small towns under siege by outlaws, and inclement whether didn’t have to be stuck in the 1880s.

Example of A Neo-Western. Note the lawlessness by Rocky’s wrist

I will never say I was ever a cowboy, but walking down the Vegas strip during the middle of the day in June with nothing but a bottle of water and a bandana made me relate with those characters even further.

Anyway, writing neo-westerns in a way gave me more of an appreciation for the classic stuff. Sure “The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly” gets all the love but “For a Few Dollars More” was pretty great too. Not to mention the other film I have in my collection:

Not even an annoying wife character could ruin this flick

This past weekend, a team of filmmakers and I competed in the San Diego 48hr film project. It is essentially a filmmaking race, where you have two days to complete a film from start to finish. They give you a character, line of dialog, and a prop to use and you have to fit all the elements in (I figure it was a cheating deterrent). They also give you a genre. Can you imagine what we got?

Punk-Rock Musical?! No, I’m kidding. A western.

Since I signed up as the writer, scripting duties fell on my lap. I couldn’t even imagine how that would have went down if I had folded my arms and said “I don’t do westerns. I hate westerns.” Luckily that wasn’t the case.

Maybe you could pull the whole “getting to know something you hate and maybe you might like it thing” to other aspects in life, but I don’t think my blog would ever be that profound.

Until next time,

–Flobo

“Faster” Teaser

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